tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post8958860086931043387..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: Posted for One Shoot SundayJenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-27755515126629533332011-02-07T01:37:10.311-07:002011-02-07T01:37:10.311-07:00thanks everyone-- making my way from wondrous poem...thanks everyone-- making my way from wondrous poem to wondrous poem-- see you wednesday or on she writes...xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-75350702447028714442011-02-06T19:21:05.081-07:002011-02-06T19:21:05.081-07:00I liked how the stanzas sing to one another, start...I liked how the stanzas sing to one another, startling and engaging us with both subject and poetic device.Cheryl Snellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00282790491003471641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-81585682510620562082011-02-06T15:44:18.506-07:002011-02-06T15:44:18.506-07:00Intriguing.Intriguing.Pennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-72672088791412407822011-02-06T14:05:01.410-07:002011-02-06T14:05:01.410-07:00Love the personification here, especially how the ...Love the personification here, especially how the emotions flow--sadness, loneliness, abandonment, and anger. The juxtaposition between the 2nd and 3rd stanzas is so nice, and the warning at the end, its pain and anger, are palpable. Really fine writing, Jenne', as usual!Ami Mattisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391930163467566669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-63554089537830197812011-02-06T13:29:06.819-07:002011-02-06T13:29:06.819-07:00this is fabulous. You made me smile mid-read and t...this is fabulous. You made me smile mid-read and then sigh in sorrow at the end.<br /><br />"If anyone sings O Canada here<br />they do not sing for me."<br /><br />Wow!<br /><br />Louise GLouise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-10421978566809608362011-02-06T11:46:30.221-07:002011-02-06T11:46:30.221-07:00Can only echo hedgewitch. Really like how that fir...Can only echo hedgewitch. Really like how that first stanza slides into the second's initial lines; the lamentation finds its culmination in the "red mouth", all the images of fire so well sustained.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-485034798207074492011-02-06T11:43:13.169-07:002011-02-06T11:43:13.169-07:00striking, I meant.striking, I meant.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-59372656691175888172011-02-06T11:42:14.436-07:002011-02-06T11:42:14.436-07:00I love that the Wobblies found their way into your...I love that the Wobblies found their way into your poem! The last four lines are sriking. I feel like that myself, sometimes.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-86262019113048176972011-02-06T11:40:28.832-07:002011-02-06T11:40:28.832-07:00Love the elements of personification, as well as e...Love the elements of personification, as well as elements of humor and cultural references. Written beautifully. Excellent creative take on the prompt. Enjoy the rest of your weekend :)dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-11826095327247863462011-02-06T11:15:52.119-07:002011-02-06T11:15:52.119-07:00There is always something unexpected and piercing ...There is always something unexpected and piercing in your poems, jenne, and this one is no exception. You've painted a whole intact world on the canvas of the granary, which you truly make haunted with your words. Love that fourth stanza, and the imperative ending command/threat/warn-off especially.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com