tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post8330510275911834402..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: A Poem for One Shot Wednesday....Jenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-65165880936205955812011-03-24T23:12:14.656-06:002011-03-24T23:12:14.656-06:00Dear Jen
Wow... It was powerful.. your words were...Dear Jen<br /><br />Wow... It was powerful.. your words were so beautiful..<br />'The blue rivers of my veins<br />Course along--<br />I am dust in the wind,<br />I am a dross of dried lavender'<br />Thanks for sharing..<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/03/whispers-seed-and-senseless-living.html<br />At Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-52512922501634649162011-03-23T17:07:39.113-06:002011-03-23T17:07:39.113-06:00Jenine, this is mesmerizing and beautiful. It remi...Jenine, this is mesmerizing and beautiful. It reminds me of how I felt back in the 60's when Judy Collins haunting melodies filled my mind with words that carried me, as if on a sea-bourne wind. Your poetry does the same. You pull me in and out of your kitchen and thoughts as lightly as dust, never making me aware that you wrote this and thought about using words. It's absolutely ethereal yet solid as stone. Wonderful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-76290498096989846942011-03-23T16:46:37.657-06:002011-03-23T16:46:37.657-06:00stunning imagery and nice flow...through the fall ...stunning imagery and nice flow...through the fall and all that followed the hands still dancing say much...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-26050893771740878192011-03-23T15:34:03.512-06:002011-03-23T15:34:03.512-06:00There is an enriching sense of wonder through your...There is an enriching sense of wonder through your lines—an intrepid creativity that seems comfortable exploring notions and imagery of annihilation, as well as creation. Revealing journey in search of revelation.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.com