tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post7852995316424542953..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: New Poem: Compline, Posting for DVerse Poets and Beyond....Jenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-36047917330459135222012-05-07T01:22:05.405-06:002012-05-07T01:22:05.405-06:00Thanks to each wonderful writer commenting on this...Thanks to each wonderful writer commenting on this piece-- great shots in the arm for me....xjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-17184394549874115032012-05-02T21:24:08.698-06:002012-05-02T21:24:08.698-06:00As always J, a great lyrical piece that spans so m...As always J, a great lyrical piece that spans so much emotional history, and in such finely crafted words. You really do carve ivory, and I think of those amazing miniatures that seem to contain the world.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-3444505731673861062012-05-02T09:43:09.517-06:002012-05-02T09:43:09.517-06:00A lyric wonderland, masterfully crafted!A lyric wonderland, masterfully crafted!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-20463350029434287912012-05-02T08:40:00.404-06:002012-05-02T08:40:00.404-06:00I love the imagery of this poem.I love the imagery of this poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-62890939650159585522012-05-02T04:43:02.527-06:002012-05-02T04:43:02.527-06:00PS - I mentioned the bowl of apples -- but there a...PS - I mentioned the bowl of apples -- but there are so many great images and lines--the candlelight, the walnut, the christ descending the grotto, the whole disintegration of conversation--k.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-23451272321420070782012-05-02T04:41:22.041-06:002012-05-02T04:41:22.041-06:00This is wonderful. Meetings, reunions can be like...This is wonderful. Meetings, reunions can be like that - talking of wrong things. I love so many lines but the bowl of apples is perhaps my favorite. K>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-56909905708022699102012-05-02T04:15:33.305-06:002012-05-02T04:15:33.305-06:00Thanks so very much! So heartening and the collec...Thanks so very much! So heartening and the collective work just on this thread-- fabulous! will return favor soon... xxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-17535403811457871732012-05-01T18:11:24.855-06:002012-05-01T18:11:24.855-06:00There are some amazing turns of phrase in here. Am...There are some amazing turns of phrase in here. Am going to follow your blog more closely!poemblazehttp://poemblaze.wordpress.com/2012/05/01/jongleur/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-228426325184870822012-05-01T17:09:15.523-06:002012-05-01T17:09:15.523-06:00Some of the best lines I've read of late. The...Some of the best lines I've read of late. The prying open of the walnut is classic. Very skillful.henry clemmonshttp://henryclemmons.wordpress.com/2012/04/30/an-opinion-on-lost-love/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-5363881353908908482012-05-01T16:15:23.450-06:002012-05-01T16:15:23.450-06:00What an incredible piece! The imagery is so unexp...What an incredible piece! The imagery is so unexpected, and the pacing is flawless.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-80697310819489608992012-05-01T15:32:42.816-06:002012-05-01T15:32:42.816-06:00So many great line here, but "I try to pry op...So many great line here, but "I try to pry open the walnut of your silence..." really grabs me, because I know how tough a nut that sometimes is to crack.Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-36228038247867651372012-05-01T14:21:34.738-06:002012-05-01T14:21:34.738-06:00I loved your poem with its smart images and poised...I loved your poem with its smart images and poised silences, Jenne. I also enjoyed reading your frank interview about the publishing world these days. You have had quite a literary journey! --AlexandraAlexandra van de kamphttp://www.alexandravandekamp.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-19211054462760078582012-05-01T14:14:11.952-06:002012-05-01T14:14:11.952-06:00Those ghosts are pesky little entities that nag an...Those ghosts are pesky little entities that nag and bite. Great write which tugged adequately at my heart strings.Shanhttp://repressedsoul.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-87482584128041129502012-05-01T14:13:01.586-06:002012-05-01T14:13:01.586-06:00This is captivatingly beautiful Jenné...
…rob
Ima...This is captivatingly beautiful Jenné...<br /><br />…rob<br /><a href="http://image-verse.com/surfacing" rel="nofollow">Image & Verse</a>robkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-87126243833397499952012-05-01T14:07:05.535-06:002012-05-01T14:07:05.535-06:00the veering light
with its tiny lyric of smoke.......the veering light<br />with its tiny lyric of smoke....<br /><br />i could see that, feel it, hear it. just lovely.mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-26832351449215678812012-05-01T13:47:40.637-06:002012-05-01T13:47:40.637-06:00A blue bowl of apples seems an image of peace, of ...A blue bowl of apples seems an image of peace, of nobility, symbolizing fecundity and common sense. The language here elevates the commonplace into the august. Beautiful.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-4694993802800073792012-05-01T13:27:24.803-06:002012-05-01T13:27:24.803-06:00great images throughout but esp. loved...I try to ...great images throughout but esp. loved...I try to pry open the walnut of your silence,<br />for I know that within you have sailed<br />around the world...these lines stick out for me...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-66223238406823886002012-05-01T13:22:53.618-06:002012-05-01T13:22:53.618-06:00That is 'parola vivace] alright :-)
loved the ...That is 'parola vivace] alright :-)<br />loved the walnut metaphor and had to look up excoriation. Very intricate and rich.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-20311830832190301492012-05-01T13:12:32.963-06:002012-05-01T13:12:32.963-06:00ha some really great lines in this jenne....waking...ha some really great lines in this jenne....waking sleeping bodies in the graveyard of our history...winding down the stairs like pocket watches...smiles....both great touches in this...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com