tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post4967640843428134092..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: For One Shot Wednesday and As New Challenge for All Comers....Jenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-22570266547687119842010-12-30T19:43:27.657-07:002010-12-30T19:43:27.657-07:00I can't improve on what the others have said o...I can't improve on what the others have said of this already. The loss of Seamus still so close and Mr Stuffy before him, I feel the catch in my throat.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-66977749602048378392010-12-28T21:10:33.010-07:002010-12-28T21:10:33.010-07:00ah, beautiful story telling...regardless of the sa...ah, beautiful story telling...regardless of the sadness it rings...and yes i can see how you learned of love...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-60771349742674381832010-12-28T19:37:16.853-07:002010-12-28T19:37:16.853-07:00Such a beautiful, moving poem. Choice details rend...Such a beautiful, moving poem. Choice details render vivid scenes and by the end I felt spent emotionally, yet uplifted..."Turn up love’s flame,<br />Turn, and burn on." Well said!dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-65646052516457914132010-12-28T17:33:04.715-07:002010-12-28T17:33:04.715-07:00I was doing all right reading this. I was. Then I ...I was doing all right reading this. I was. Then I got to the line about "To give the body of love/ Back to the earth" and lost it. <br /><br />All the details are perfect...the crabapples, the flashlight, the description of the man, all of them make this so real. But it is the last four lines that make the poemn, in the end. <br /><br />SO good. But you made me cry, dammit.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-37609275994184897192010-12-28T17:27:54.674-07:002010-12-28T17:27:54.674-07:00no better way to carry me back to same only in chi...no better way to carry me back to same only in childhood, mourning process of my life's best friend. thanks for taking me back there. I smile now and enjoy his memory.Montyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17446385166445251013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-37814324226592128452010-12-28T16:51:30.412-07:002010-12-28T16:51:30.412-07:00Thanks, Moon-- but it did teach me much about love...Thanks, Moon-- but it did teach me much about love! xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-6271048044593791932010-12-28T16:18:15.442-07:002010-12-28T16:18:15.442-07:00Beautifully written and sad turn of events. It is ...Beautifully written and sad turn of events. It is a fine and loving tribute to a friend<br /><br />Thanks for sharing with One Shotmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.com