tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post2979403831094915446..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: New Poem: A Beautiful Sadness-- for Dverse Poets Poetics and Beyond...Jenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-75681105175930971412012-08-13T02:14:52.929-06:002012-08-13T02:14:52.929-06:00a beautiful sadness indeed...
loved esp. the world...a beautiful sadness indeed...<br />loved esp. the world itself dancing toward us in a red dress of possibility...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-82983855040715773902012-08-12T20:58:19.509-06:002012-08-12T20:58:19.509-06:00...and you continue to preach to the choir with me......and you continue to preach to the choir with me, Jenne. Childhood longing is indeed beautifully sad. So, nice to see your comment on my blog. Hope you are well.sheilahttp://shewriting.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-63284154764167444062012-08-12T18:41:25.648-06:002012-08-12T18:41:25.648-06:00Incredible imagery! "in the alfalfa
incense ...Incredible imagery! "in the alfalfa<br />incense of summer" just took my breath away.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-39321992686420337262012-08-12T17:34:49.011-06:002012-08-12T17:34:49.011-06:00The rise and fall of remonstrating voices of the m...The rise and fall of remonstrating voices of the mother and father is telling ~ I do like the invitation, but how her desert heart wounds ~ Lovely writing ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-58782772756789855662012-08-12T17:02:57.298-06:002012-08-12T17:02:57.298-06:00wow. you really bring this to life jenne with your...wow. you really bring this to life jenne with your deft pen...smiles...the lines of the hallway leading to the light...i feel you in there esp in light of all that comes before it...nicely done...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-87641619838247529792012-08-12T16:02:02.224-06:002012-08-12T16:02:02.224-06:00Such melancholic tones... I loved the abode held t...Such melancholic tones... I loved the abode held the family like a darkly veined hand in the alfalfa incense of summer. Beauty all about and a sadness withinAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-59600523047372980862012-08-12T15:19:57.885-06:002012-08-12T15:19:57.885-06:00This is tight, written with precision and some rea...This is tight, written with precision and some real excellent word usage. I interpreted this as focused on the family, the yearning for love which so often doesn't materialise within what should be the most loving environment of all. And in that very fact- that families are so often besieged with difficulties, turmoils, there lies a beautiful sadness- and you captured it so poetically, with such melancholy- well- it was excellent - very much enjoyed it- one of my favourite lines being the close- her hair a wound- loved this. Thank you for stopping by and thank you for sharing! P.s hope I interpreted it right! I often miss the mark and tend to go off on wild tangents! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-32353501136685886922012-08-12T14:36:58.278-06:002012-08-12T14:36:58.278-06:00Hi Jenne, Yes, a beautifully sad poem--wasted cha...Hi Jenne, Yes, a beautifully sad poem--wasted chances. It is hard to transcend absences, especially as a child when one knows few differences. k.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-46722981271734808592012-08-12T09:23:56.670-06:002012-08-12T09:23:56.670-06:00All of the senses manifest in this lovely poem. So...All of the senses manifest in this lovely poem. So many beautiful images.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com