tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post1949637706969622138..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: New Poem: The Artifice of Mirrors, posting for Magpie Tales and Beyond...Jenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-22430474955592712892012-03-30T20:41:40.329-06:002012-03-30T20:41:40.329-06:00I love thinking of volition as a character--and vo...I love thinking of volition as a character--and volition and honey another great juxtoposition. In my mind, volition almost always ends up with the disciplined choice. Nice to see it getting a reward. K.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-23485056015147225062012-03-27T06:18:10.592-06:002012-03-27T06:18:10.592-06:00many memories and questions stored in the mirror
H...many memories and questions stored in the mirror<br />Hope all is well Jennemoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-48352777668879517832012-03-26T07:24:51.891-06:002012-03-26T07:24:51.891-06:00Whose tear is it that runs the furrow of the cheek...Whose tear is it that runs the furrow of the cheek? Should she or shouldn't she? Unanswered questions posed by artifice. Nicely done.Little Nellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862657943846727987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-11457836467958460882012-03-25T20:48:18.576-06:002012-03-25T20:48:18.576-06:00i hope it was wroth finding the honey in the garde...i hope it was wroth finding the honey in the garden<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/03/25/mirrored/" rel="nofollow">mirrored</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-56932491936275076782012-03-25T15:06:04.672-06:002012-03-25T15:06:04.672-06:00Lovely take on the prompt, Jenne. I especially lik...Lovely take on the prompt, Jenne. I especially like "gilded cage of artifice" and those last three lines of the last stanza.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-9704698483544498722012-03-25T14:45:02.395-06:002012-03-25T14:45:02.395-06:00I enjoyed this poem, particularly,
"I brush m...I enjoyed this poem, particularly,<br />"I brush my hair from my brow<br />She follows suit."<br /><br />Thanks for introducing me to Andrews. I had not heard of her before.Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-33917281756940811922012-03-25T12:51:18.894-06:002012-03-25T12:51:18.894-06:00"To love Self or not to love her"...and ..."To love Self or not to love her"...and then your last stanza...powerful Jenne...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.com