tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post1448395327211965212..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: Poem for DVerse Open Link Night: The Insomnia GardenJenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-48993303127718852732012-09-18T19:14:36.441-06:002012-09-18T19:14:36.441-06:00A rich,gorgeous poem Jenne. I have missed reading ...A rich,gorgeous poem Jenne. I have missed reading your work over the past several months. Just catching up a bit.Ann Grenierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13501522748426995035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-44166422022223191592012-09-12T14:00:24.323-06:002012-09-12T14:00:24.323-06:00I love the way you return to the bread and the wat...I love the way you return to the bread and the water motifs. What a fabulous, image-rich poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-10224354556524389202012-09-12T08:35:31.766-06:002012-09-12T08:35:31.766-06:00Poignant piece, Jenne. Poignant piece, Jenne. Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-29641888790407346142012-09-11T20:16:09.100-06:002012-09-11T20:16:09.100-06:00Very well done - somehow I felt at the end this gr...Very well done - somehow I felt at the end this great change in the story of Cana - where the water does not become wine but perhaps breast milk - <br /><br />Your details are so vivid and beautiful = particularly of the old women at the bath - life is long - so many permutations. (But your work is always terrific.) k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-55907432899351825832012-09-11T18:56:48.096-06:002012-09-11T18:56:48.096-06:00The embedding of the various stages of life speaks...The embedding of the various stages of life speaks with such emotion in your words, lovely ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-58720344859895331292012-09-11T18:11:21.065-06:002012-09-11T18:11:21.065-06:00this is lovely, universal, heart-wrenching. the he...this is lovely, universal, heart-wrenching. the heartless passage of time.mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-30625411371571845252012-09-11T16:10:28.775-06:002012-09-11T16:10:28.775-06:00i like your old man at the coffee counter...i migh...i like your old man at the coffee counter...i might have returned to him as well...but he has told you what you need already....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-53028539421574643222012-09-11T15:31:04.700-06:002012-09-11T15:31:04.700-06:00Fascinating dream story you tell here. I wonder at...Fascinating dream story you tell here. I wonder at the meaning of the old man, perhaps a symbol of God (who recommends amor loca :P)<br /><br />Late one night<br />I met someone who spoke<br />Of my true desires<br />Until I dreamed myself awake<br />And my wakeful mind <br />Remembered no more.Frank Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11512960953837979822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-72956224179052186192012-09-11T15:09:31.199-06:002012-09-11T15:09:31.199-06:00This is beautiful and I seem to be able to relate ...This is beautiful and I seem to be able to relate so well to this dream called living..thank you ....bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-71371006684330647902012-09-11T13:43:37.644-06:002012-09-11T13:43:37.644-06:00Wow, not even sure what to say, such a powerful an...Wow, not even sure what to say, such a powerful and vivid write.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com