tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post1238830771315996026..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: New Poem: Fantasia, Posting for DVerse OLN and Beyond...Jenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-62800401369312104082012-02-09T11:42:37.506-07:002012-02-09T11:42:37.506-07:00Dear Jenne,
I'm having such problems comment...Dear Jenne, <br /><br />I'm having such problems commenting from my home computer that a little worried my comment didn't "take". A lovely poem, with so many great images--I have listed the ones that stuck with me a few times! The blue elephants of regret, the predatory insomnia, the grasping roses, the Wagner aria, the legs, the Citronella poet--terribly sad, of course, but inspiring--the song palpable. k.Manicddailyhttp://manicddaily.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-40391039483785012752012-02-09T06:57:48.820-07:002012-02-09T06:57:48.820-07:00Agh, Jenne, I left a comment that did not take. I...Agh, Jenne, I left a comment that did not take. I'm having a great deal of trouble with commenting lately. <br /><br />A beautiful heartfelt poem--so many memorable images adding up to the whole-- I had made a whole list--blue elephants, regret, citronella candle poet, grasping leaves of rose, Wagner, legs, predatory insomnia==this is just a part of list as now I must rush. Wonderful, hope this takes. K.Manicddailyhttp://manicddaily.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-64935107612176381482012-02-09T05:31:54.434-07:002012-02-09T05:31:54.434-07:00Hi Jenne, this is a very sad but glorious poem too...Hi Jenne, this is a very sad but glorious poem too. There are many many memorable lines--the grasping roses, the predatory insomnia, the citronella poet, the flying other, the new legs, the traded decrepitude, the Wagnerian aria, the swooping owl, the blue elephants of regret--I'm just going through by my memory (which is not great), the teeny hands of leaves and topaz nectar--<br /><br />Of course, it also adds up to a greater whole, but there are such wonderful building blocks there in your images. K.Manicddailyhttp://manicddaily.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-36449286790060139192012-02-08T19:22:16.956-07:002012-02-08T19:22:16.956-07:00So personal and yet so universal, such vivid image...So personal and yet so universal, such vivid images and strong feelings rolling along with your lyrical words. Bless you Jenne! xoxoMystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-84973367324735787872012-02-08T11:54:41.357-07:002012-02-08T11:54:41.357-07:00Definitely a keepr Jenne!Definitely a keepr Jenne!John Richterhttp://johnallenrichter.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-65981063963666966302012-02-07T20:13:22.261-07:002012-02-07T20:13:22.261-07:00Jenne, yours is another unique and personal voice....Jenne, yours is another unique and personal voice. Each poem seems to expand on the last broadening the landscape of your personal vision, and casting a look into a universe of possibilities, or possible "others" where each of us can wander and wonder. The preciousness and tenuousness of life is always present in your work. It makes me think.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-86133485670896859212012-02-07T19:57:35.063-07:002012-02-07T19:57:35.063-07:00Jenne- I really like this, especially ii.
http://...Jenne- I really like this, especially ii.<br /><br /><a rel="nofollow">http://lkkolp.wordpress.com/2012/02/07/granted-constitutional-rights/</a>Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-40709156679464305002012-02-07T18:10:18.176-07:002012-02-07T18:10:18.176-07:00Fantastic! (and much gratitude for your good eye a...Fantastic! (and much gratitude for your good eye at my space!)Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-30263415589187182792012-02-07T17:16:15.468-07:002012-02-07T17:16:15.468-07:00So many lines to love...
I especially like :
......So many lines to love...<br /><br />I especially like :<br /><br />...waterfalls of starlight and impotence...<br /><br />and<br /><br />...the billowing blue elephants of regret...Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-28987968774139601252012-02-07T16:40:49.353-07:002012-02-07T16:40:49.353-07:00i feel this is a very personal poem...particularly...i feel this is a very personal poem...particularly those last two...using up her own tallow...wishing to be in a new body out...i think it is something many of us can relate to ...and so we write...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-77007001280295196692012-02-07T15:15:41.698-07:002012-02-07T15:15:41.698-07:00Brilliant read thank you xBrilliant read thank you xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10624767707167052328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-8337802189598951362012-02-07T15:11:41.061-07:002012-02-07T15:11:41.061-07:00Just gorgeous writing! I love your imagery and us...Just gorgeous writing! I love your imagery and use of metaphor--this piece just sings to me--<br /><br />@AudreyHowittAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-57915007856861052952012-02-07T14:18:59.349-07:002012-02-07T14:18:59.349-07:00The aberrations of the universe have us by the thr...The aberrations of the universe have us by the throat -><br /><br />not really the universe, but of society. the psychopaths, the sociopaths, the evil and the good intentioned liberals who give EVERYONE the same rights and liberties, even if they are to take advantage of them in the worst ways, have us by the throat.<br /><br />many good people believe that fighting is bad, even if it means fighting back, and that weakens the ones who are willing to fight.<br /><br />thanks for your support on my page.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com