tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post1229169329883105681..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: Posting for Friday Poetry Fest and beyond: The Wings of Our ComprehensionJenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-62336190062605717002011-09-25T06:01:59.748-06:002011-09-25T06:01:59.748-06:00and so we should be, we should be, we should be, a...and so we should be, we should be, we should be, and as we are here being, we should sing.<br /><i><br />in a truancy<br />Of the will</i><br /><br />it is by our own fault that we fail. i think on all of the concrete here. we lay it down. we hold ourselves too far from god and being. we should return to the forests, the fields. we should be.<br /><br />xo<br />erinerinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16636371927224076866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-28580913247676026452011-09-24T11:11:29.604-06:002011-09-24T11:11:29.604-06:00I have the feeling this poem will, indeed, be perc...I have the feeling this poem will, indeed, be perceived differently by every single person who reads it... I am not a religious person, so I quickly discarded the idea of God and saw 'you' speaking only to the ray of light... And I liked it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-52615060594227180392011-09-24T07:54:45.572-06:002011-09-24T07:54:45.572-06:00Lovely! Lovely! Brava! Bella! So nicely done Jenne...Lovely! Lovely! Brava! Bella! So nicely done Jenne. I love your images and textures, I could feel the sunbeam.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.com