tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post9098487205785315708..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: Poem: Paraffin, Posting for DVerse Poets and Beyond...Jenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-75870677462925743632012-06-02T00:33:43.853-06:002012-06-02T00:33:43.853-06:00Thanks to all-- deeply appreciated; we who write i...Thanks to all-- deeply appreciated; we who write in isolation cannot know what chord we strike unless we put the work out there... have not been all that sure of this poem but thanks very much! I am slow to make the round these days but do eventually...xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-12152069086099238582012-05-31T12:23:34.615-06:002012-05-31T12:23:34.615-06:00There is really beautiful narrative here! Reads l...There is really beautiful narrative here! Reads lovely.Jessicahttp://authoredangioplasty.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-91605464683891355482012-05-30T13:03:03.061-06:002012-05-30T13:03:03.061-06:00Beautiful language and images you use here...a joy...Beautiful language and images you use here...a joy to read :)Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-24485418887193280262012-05-30T09:23:35.280-06:002012-05-30T09:23:35.280-06:00This is lovely, and at the same time poignant. The...This is lovely, and at the same time poignant. The sense of things relegated to the past, of decades spent together, of candles burning down too fast -- as life itself does. The image of the swaybacked buffalo candle! <br /><br />One wonders whether if candelight is really preference or a need for economy that motivates the candlelight, but even sadness on inadequate Social Security looks better in candleglow. Enjoyed this!Charles Elliott/Beautyseerhttp://youtu.be/KAhXyRvpBcYnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-18843696241984925912012-05-30T08:30:18.929-06:002012-05-30T08:30:18.929-06:00Absolutely stunning write! It's been sometime ...Absolutely stunning write! It's been sometime since I've visited, and I should be ashamed of myself. The easy voice of your pen allows me to fall into this time, this place...I should be so lucky as to write like this.Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-56638375793829028212012-05-30T06:38:16.741-06:002012-05-30T06:38:16.741-06:00Yes - a great choice of image - easy to relate to ...Yes - a great choice of image - easy to relate to but vivid, and the evening wicking to midnight - beautiful description of how it in fact works. k.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-55889892869539596302012-05-29T20:42:45.328-06:002012-05-29T20:42:45.328-06:00Lovely! I especially like the last line.Lovely! I especially like the last line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-16350564869082082962012-05-29T19:12:24.288-06:002012-05-29T19:12:24.288-06:00A nice capture with some lovely lines!A nice capture with some lovely lines!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-63918952895088421752012-05-29T15:25:11.045-06:002012-05-29T15:25:11.045-06:00Juxtaposition of the American West, rugged and wor...Juxtaposition of the American West, rugged and working, beauty on the large scale juxtaposed with the delicacy and perfection of Russian ballet - one has the sense of the candle in the china cabinet resting next to the delicate bone china. Beauty here take a spectrum of forms.<br />Well writ!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-26630511650553586062012-05-29T09:41:28.354-06:002012-05-29T09:41:28.354-06:00Wonderful image of the buffalo-styled candle burni...Wonderful image of the buffalo-styled candle burning down, becoming sway-backed (I think of burdens here, what gets carried into the future, leaving us with memory, half-worked possibilities, what's pressed into darkness but not forgotten).Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com