tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post9020110697021943668..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: New Poem - Westward -- for Friday Poetry Fest and BeyondJenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-68434554562093361552011-09-18T17:37:22.599-06:002011-09-18T17:37:22.599-06:00You have an ability that only a few writers have, ...You have an ability that only a few writers have, which I aspire to - to take an ordinary circumstance, and to weave it into something extraordinary. Here then, a chance meeting at a supermarket becomes an evocation of relationships, of regret, of destiny, that elevates the ordinary above the fluorescent pallor of a grocery superstore. Excellent work!Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-76138644955779635242011-09-16T16:57:20.972-06:002011-09-16T16:57:20.972-06:00This poem leaves me breathless...and speechless. ...This poem leaves me breathless...and speechless. Tremendous.Lisa Bnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-35640564129278346622011-09-16T16:21:53.568-06:002011-09-16T16:21:53.568-06:00...a sentence on fire...
That describes your sty......a sentence on fire...<br /><br /> That describes your style to a "T"Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-4788077882106333642011-09-16T11:38:08.838-06:002011-09-16T11:38:08.838-06:00Thank you, Erin, Ruth, Shanyn for such humbling an...Thank you, Erin, Ruth, Shanyn for such humbling and love-filled comments. Thank you especially for inspiring me with your beautiful work to carry on. xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-12788285358192267672011-09-16T08:46:40.509-06:002011-09-16T08:46:40.509-06:00Jenne I don't know how you do it but you richl...Jenne I don't know how you do it but you richly paint such feeling filled poems that I can see, hear, taste, touch and feel deeply. Brava my dear, Brava!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-53155678251446042932011-09-16T04:46:06.676-06:002011-09-16T04:46:06.676-06:00Good god this is powerful. You are incredibly gift...Good god this is powerful. You are incredibly gifted at this craft. I am humbled by your . . . everything: sight, insight, language. I think you're one of the very best top notch poets out here.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-85631929737785475322011-09-15T06:53:05.355-06:002011-09-15T06:53:05.355-06:00jesus, jenn, it is all right here,
And I can’t t...jesus, jenn, it is all right here, <br /><br /><i>And I can’t tell you<br />Or even myself, the true truth of things<br />I love avocados and the dark</i><br /><br />i am weeping inside of me for everything, for you, for me, the man, even the avocados so desperately green and here, so undeniable. it is all a heartbeat.<br /><br />beautiful beautiful you.<br /><br />xo<br />erinerinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16636371927224076866noreply@blogger.com