tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post7745502708295486169..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: New Poem: The Time of the Red SofaJenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-42585837956128801482011-11-30T09:09:47.281-07:002011-11-30T09:09:47.281-07:00What a beautiful write - thank you.
Anna :o]What a beautiful write - thank you.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-71104708136495714932011-11-29T00:22:49.692-07:002011-11-29T00:22:49.692-07:00Lovely poem Jenne, I particularly liked 'use m...Lovely poem Jenne, I particularly liked 'use me like an Allelulia'. Thought provoking and appropriate to the season.Isabel Doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17974989548030799086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-38784463182426540242011-11-28T16:30:35.871-07:002011-11-28T16:30:35.871-07:00"The refuse of our plentiful living that pile..."The refuse of our plentiful living that piles up and spills from the door-mouths."<br /><br />How very true...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-42112882979043641752011-11-28T16:10:26.174-07:002011-11-28T16:10:26.174-07:00Beautiful. It does seem we have become a disposab...Beautiful. It does seem we have become a disposable society. Love the way you perceived this one. Well done.CHummelKornellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10862056292807754590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-33644832722163407312011-11-28T15:10:48.421-07:002011-11-28T15:10:48.421-07:00Oh, love it! 'Are we not done in...' grea...Oh, love it! 'Are we not done in...' great line. Yes, it's high time we listen to the pigeons!Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-80187214202352723382011-11-28T12:06:39.964-07:002011-11-28T12:06:39.964-07:00Graceful and well constructed. Thank youGraceful and well constructed. Thank youTrellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-24842926437762866372011-11-28T07:26:39.089-07:002011-11-28T07:26:39.089-07:00O I love this. I smiled at the very first line. Ho...O I love this. I smiled at the very first line. How perfect. And yet surprising, and fresh.<br /><br />Rage is associated with red, yet how beautiful to contemplate the season of red, with a sofa as alleluia.<br /><br />You're brilliant.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-13001487520401403892011-11-28T04:39:06.119-07:002011-11-28T04:39:06.119-07:00I like this, a lot. A sofa, no matter how old, can...I like this, a lot. A sofa, no matter how old, can be a life-saver.Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494219959077922220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-90548935562914465032011-11-27T20:47:14.606-07:002011-11-27T20:47:14.606-07:00The pigeons' commentary has a Christmas carol ...The pigeons' commentary has a Christmas carol / Hallelujah chorus feel, at the same time as there's a winter-as-storehouse recuperative sense. It's interesting to see these two elements together.Anonymoushttp://drinkthenewwine.blogspot.com/2011/11/blood-bird-and-stone.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-27191738519960910642011-11-27T18:28:01.128-07:002011-11-27T18:28:01.128-07:00The refuse of our plentiful living that piles up
A...The refuse of our plentiful living that piles up<br />And spills from the door-mouths.<br /><br />Oh so true. You weave words with skill as always, Jen. This challenges and questions, leaving me thinking and seeing the need for change. Lovely. xxZoehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16929674746784140738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-86422710366891533612011-11-27T17:15:07.583-07:002011-11-27T17:15:07.583-07:00Lovely how you worked in the references to Advent ...Lovely how you worked in the references to Advent and the meaning of the season of renewal.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-57920241209873038152011-11-27T16:05:12.987-07:002011-11-27T16:05:12.987-07:00Beautiful message, beautiful write...Beautiful message, beautiful write...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-90012155051898370572011-11-27T13:40:54.890-07:002011-11-27T13:40:54.890-07:00What a beautiful and emotional piece.What a beautiful and emotional piece.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903678715925613725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-49946090904637196192011-11-27T12:24:40.724-07:002011-11-27T12:24:40.724-07:00Beautiful... I love the metaphor of angry words cr...Beautiful... I love the metaphor of angry words crashing down the mountain.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-25822822814869587052011-11-27T11:30:09.817-07:002011-11-27T11:30:09.817-07:00what a beautiful and timely message! Are we not d...what a beautiful and timely message! Are we not done in from watching<br />The rivers of blood overflow?<br />- I hope we are done soon. And the last stanza is perfection.Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.com