tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post7721641930482868364..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: New Poem: The Body LeansJenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-71007491716578217412012-03-01T17:24:17.287-07:002012-03-01T17:24:17.287-07:00Great work. =)Great work. =)Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-37828473935224802122012-02-08T12:24:20.726-07:002012-02-08T12:24:20.726-07:00Because I am doing metaphors in my poetry workshop...Because I am doing metaphors in my poetry workshop these jumped out at me - esp the first one:<br /><br />"The colossal winging griffins of shame,<br />the billowing blue elephants of regret,<br />the hounds of failure all with their<br />hot, rancid breath."<br /><br />MAN... they're awesome!<br /><br />Love the poem as a whole, too ...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10094116226854880072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-65892692600848997892012-02-02T21:45:56.731-07:002012-02-02T21:45:56.731-07:00Hi Jenne,
I love the gilded apples that remind m...Hi Jenne, <br /><br />I love the gilded apples that remind me both of Helen and Yeats--though I think my favorite lines are these:<br /><br />It has been drinking cup on cup<br /><br />From the waters of Lethe.<br />It has sent its soliloquies out<br /><br />In pale blue bottles.<br /><br />As if it is almost bartering in the waters of forgetfulness. K.Manicddailyhttp://manicddaily.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-1285605362431119352012-02-02T19:11:32.898-07:002012-02-02T19:11:32.898-07:00"It has sent its soliloquies out
In pale blue..."It has sent its soliloquies out<br />In pale blue bottles."<br /><br />That is such an exquisite image!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-38661816904775181552012-02-02T14:27:51.271-07:002012-02-02T14:27:51.271-07:00Beautiful.
Have you recorded any of your poems, J...Beautiful.<br /><br />Have you recorded any of your poems, Jenne? This has such a lovely cadence and would seem to lend itself so well to being spoken.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com