tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post7157187434060113052..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: What /Who I Was Doing in 1999.... for DVerse PoeticsJenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-36488628084094304302012-03-13T18:15:21.032-06:002012-03-13T18:15:21.032-06:00Whew...a searing and beautiful write from you...ho...Whew...a searing and beautiful write from you...how you described him so well (so cold and unflinching) and as well as your night...enjoyed this ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-70846711589507003342012-03-13T15:11:53.404-06:002012-03-13T15:11:53.404-06:00Nice girls don't do that...but who likes nice ...Nice girls don't do that...but who likes nice girls? <br />This poem is what I've come to fancy, and adore, and to just sit here in slack-jawed amazement about you.Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-77501137870068272702012-03-11T16:29:40.642-06:002012-03-11T16:29:40.642-06:00This gave me a catch in the throat. How even somet...This gave me a catch in the throat. How even something so double edged can be written with such clarity and lyricism. This, as much as any piece of yours, rings with beauty and authenticity, and might I say a personal bravery. Excellent.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-26664269988502655172012-03-11T11:45:46.215-06:002012-03-11T11:45:46.215-06:00Oh, outstanding!Oh, outstanding!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-46162788225965853302012-03-11T09:29:14.060-06:002012-03-11T09:29:14.060-06:00Oh my gosh, now THAT is heat sister!!! Wow, surely...Oh my gosh, now THAT is heat sister!!! Wow, surely I'm blushing. :)<br /><br />I have always loved your creative use of language, the visuals you draw forth with your words. I was grinning at the Old Spice bit; I think I bought that for my dad on just about every birthday and every Christmas.<br /><br />This leaves me wondering who is the greater badass, you or the millenium man?<br /><br />These are my favorite parts:<br /><br />"the tall drink of water from Savannah<br />with all the chrome"<br /><br />"He ran blue eyes over me"<br /><br />"In the parking lot a kiss; later a call"<br /><br />I really loved the back and forth conversation in italics. Very effective. I can picture the facial expressions and other nonverbals.<br /><br />"nice girls don't do that<br />Nice boys don't let them --<br />if they want to come back<br />my riposte"<br /><br />"I'd finish myself off in the dark<br />with one sympathetic hand <br />in one smooth glissade, biting my lips"<br /><br />"small whirlpools now<br />in the tide of my blood"<br /><br />I'm so glad you liked the prompt; you did a fantastic job!<br /><br />~Shawna<br />rosemarymint.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-41424109012104737282012-03-11T09:22:13.413-06:002012-03-11T09:22:13.413-06:00Jenne - oh wow...this is just wow!Jenne - oh wow...this is just wow!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-72468608280573429862012-03-11T06:13:35.347-06:002012-03-11T06:13:35.347-06:00wow so 1999 was a hot year for you...smiles....nic...wow so 1999 was a hot year for you...smiles....nice descriptors as well...i like the kinda outlaw, wild west feel you overlay jenneBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-56655634409803174162012-03-11T03:24:39.403-06:002012-03-11T03:24:39.403-06:00ha...you should never trust one who still uses old...ha...you should never trust one who still uses old spice....goodness...what an encounter..tight write like we're used from you..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com