tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post7002740677015492364..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: New Poem for DVerse Open Link Night and Beyond....Jenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-52177233453056436842012-01-04T19:52:02.735-07:002012-01-04T19:52:02.735-07:00Haunting and beautifully put.
I love this couple...Haunting and beautifully put. <br />I love this couplet: <br />the memory of your mouth<br />moving and moving like the sunrise.<br />Thanks!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10871149420280457991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-23218173841573852052012-01-04T17:21:04.946-07:002012-01-04T17:21:04.946-07:00Beautiful post...and the last lines are my fav &qu...Beautiful post...and the last lines are my fav "unrepentant and undone" ~ <br /><br />Wishing you Happy New Year ~ <br /><br />Cheers ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-48248897572771831802012-01-04T12:45:52.321-07:002012-01-04T12:45:52.321-07:00Oh...this is beautiful! Wonderful imagery 'I s...Oh...this is beautiful! Wonderful imagery 'I swam on, a snowy egret plummeting through cold starlight' ...just gorgeous. I will be a regular visitor from now on. I'm not really sure where I've been....Mars perhaps?? SuperbLouisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-36076482577663185762012-01-04T09:49:17.681-07:002012-01-04T09:49:17.681-07:00Brava bella! Wonderfully wrought Jenne, I didn'...Brava bella! Wonderfully wrought Jenne, I didn't know how much I missed your poetry until I started basking in it again!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-51570379945313322052012-01-03T23:06:15.507-07:002012-01-03T23:06:15.507-07:00hello again... enjoyed the re-read and this time i...hello again... enjoyed the re-read and this time it was like two splinters born onward<br />in a cascade.. what caught me most..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-53801096869085254882012-01-03T21:14:03.231-07:002012-01-03T21:14:03.231-07:00Wonderful poem (as always). You have such a gift ...Wonderful poem (as always). You have such a gift for imagery and pace, moment--epiphanies both for poet and reader. I especially like these lines:<br /><br />the memory of your mouth<br />moving and moving like the sunrise,<br /><br />the kiss of the opening rose<br />over my skin.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-71525509885775848452012-01-03T21:09:09.229-07:002012-01-03T21:09:09.229-07:00Truly gorgeous work, Jenne. I love your use of ima...Truly gorgeous work, Jenne. I love your use of imagery. Thank you for taking the time to reach out to me. I appreciate it. <br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-19902556840127650692012-01-03T20:02:16.305-07:002012-01-03T20:02:16.305-07:00I love this, Jenne... such intense feeling of love...I love this, Jenne... such intense feeling of love lost and tender memories. This is but one of my favorites throughout:<br /><br />I swam on, a snowy egret <br />plummeting <br /><br />through cold starlightLaurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-36007364080650255892012-01-03T19:28:18.929-07:002012-01-03T19:28:18.929-07:00High praise from each of you, whose work I deeply ...High praise from each of you, whose work I deeply admire! Love at the New Year-- JJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-42482956990037058882012-01-03T18:37:25.495-07:002012-01-03T18:37:25.495-07:00Very beautiful imagery. You create such vivid des...Very beautiful imagery. You create such vivid descriptions with your words.Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-82486704583618928752012-01-03T18:36:37.133-07:002012-01-03T18:36:37.133-07:00Lovely, intense imagery!Lovely, intense imagery!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-53240188484548236002012-01-03T17:02:35.131-07:002012-01-03T17:02:35.131-07:00Was that your moment? I am left longing for happie...Was that your moment? I am left longing for happier endings awash in the gorgeous images your words have painted. Wonderful write! Hope you enjoyed a wonderful holiday season, and Happy OpenLinkNight!Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-17712480930739191192012-01-03T14:23:45.354-07:002012-01-03T14:23:45.354-07:00thought i had read this...hope the new year is tre...thought i had read this...hope the new year is treating you well jenne...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-3393119103580814832012-01-02T08:20:22.919-07:002012-01-02T08:20:22.919-07:00There are so many strong images in this piece, yet...There are so many strong images in this piece, yet it evokes the ethereal. <br /><br />"Something far beyond tenderness<br />like a feathered cloud caught<br />in the treetop<br />comes back..." - <br />"Moving and moving like the sunrise,<br />the kiss of the opening rose<br />over my skin." -<br />"hands of the clock wildly spinning" - <br />"two splinters born onwrd in a cascade?"<br /><br />The sadness of the last stanza, though unwanted, is somewhat expected. I love this poem.cj Schlottmanhttp://cjschlottman-mypoems.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-40839303494554906092012-01-01T21:40:55.923-07:002012-01-01T21:40:55.923-07:00Lovely poem! Happy new year !Lovely poem! Happy new year !ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-78703363152754300202012-01-01T19:37:03.432-07:002012-01-01T19:37:03.432-07:00Those last lines are amazing!Those last lines are amazing!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-35761459010122190462012-01-01T16:15:19.444-07:002012-01-01T16:15:19.444-07:00I'm not surprised you picked out those beautif...I'm not surprised you picked out those beautiful lines by Aiken, but your poem - so surprising and delightful (that swimming sailing plummeting snowy egret!), even with its melancholy tones - is all you. You really are amazing. I second Semaphore: poetically, your work has been a high point of my year. All the best to you for 2012.Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-30187435578004075922012-01-01T15:42:12.154-07:002012-01-01T15:42:12.154-07:00Thanks very much-- I promise I'll hitcha back ...Thanks very much-- I promise I'll hitcha back later-- New Years-itis and letdown today, a few traumas in a row. This poem was inspired by listening to Andrea Boccelli croon a song and remembering making love to that album. I guess I'm not dead yet! Love to all and a Happy New Year! xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-25925879112379104082011-12-31T17:47:33.842-07:002011-12-31T17:47:33.842-07:00the last two stanzas are just great imagerythe last two stanzas are just great imageryAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-17882551683046125552011-12-31T15:58:39.139-07:002011-12-31T15:58:39.139-07:00lovely jenne...and a moment of fright at seeing th...lovely jenne...and a moment of fright at seeing those hands twirling so fast...i feel them at time...love the tender love you speak of...and great imagery...happy new year!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-32486407413376232932011-12-31T15:20:48.522-07:002011-12-31T15:20:48.522-07:00Your opening stanza, the sixth, and especially the...Your opening stanza, the sixth, and especially the last 6 lines contain such beautiful images. Also that wonderful sense of two who are "splinters born onward". Always so lyrical. <br /><br />I'd love to see how someone might make this into a videopoem or set it to music.<br /><br />Best to you in the new year, Jenne.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-43848409464332161462011-12-31T15:15:25.720-07:002011-12-31T15:15:25.720-07:00I am an eternal optimist, and I wished the poem co...I am an eternal optimist, and I wished the poem could have ended with redemption... but still, it is a beautiful poem, and a beautiful voice. <br /><br />For me, part of what made 2011 memorable would be discovering your poetry, new language and ideas and craftsmanship to enrich my own journey. And for this, I thank you.<br /><br />May the New Year render to you new wonders to amaze, new friends to embrace, new worlds to discover.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-23441787456794182742011-12-31T15:05:01.942-07:002011-12-31T15:05:01.942-07:00much enjoyed the intense imagery.. the wildly spin...much enjoyed the intense imagery.. the wildly spinning hands of the clock, the memories, the pain, the swimming through cold starlight into l’ anno nuovo..unrepentant, unredeemed...felt<br />wishing you a wonderful anno nuovo jenneClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com