tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post6803649434626331996..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: New Poem: Of Orpheus and Forms ...Jenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-6684945478880135422011-09-07T22:05:38.223-06:002011-09-07T22:05:38.223-06:00beautiful jenne...i'm a huge Rilke fan and i l...beautiful jenne...i'm a huge Rilke fan and i like how you go from his into your own words. beautiful details with the small blue eggs from splintered nests being my fav...also like the stanza with the man stopping on the highway..intriguing scene and the not singing in vain a perfect closureClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-6612426399937280642011-09-07T19:48:39.007-06:002011-09-07T19:48:39.007-06:00Love the feel of hope carried throughout your piec...Love the feel of hope carried throughout your piece. Wonderful imagery.<br /><br />Thank you also for your constructive crit over at my place. Very enlightening.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-75235471079733622322011-09-07T17:48:16.007-06:002011-09-07T17:48:16.007-06:00This piece forces the reader to look in the mirror...This piece forces the reader to look in the mirror, to face reality and consequence. Well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-88785790215931900142011-09-07T15:51:01.292-06:002011-09-07T15:51:01.292-06:00Truly poignant, from one who obviously feels deepl...Truly poignant, from one who obviously feels deeply.<br /><br />Did you know that a juvenile male dolphin will attempt to mate with a human female diver--and that they can always tell the women from the men?<br /><br />Don't know how that relates, but this made me think of it.Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-33385167609613445022011-09-07T15:25:35.053-06:002011-09-07T15:25:35.053-06:00this is so very lovely, and hopeful. and we all ne...this is so very lovely, and hopeful. and we all need to hope... thank you.Lesliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01221703763145912238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-74934167792295539652011-09-07T14:53:49.969-06:002011-09-07T14:53:49.969-06:00Jenne, so much of this poem resonates with me. Abs...Jenne, so much of this poem resonates with me. Absolutely gorgeous writing. Do you remember when Poets United picked your poem for poem of the week? It was me who selected it. I love your writing. I have been so busy lately. I must make a point to visit more often.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-48117085876732887502011-09-07T14:06:54.476-06:002011-09-07T14:06:54.476-06:00A piece well written, engaging – good work… mine ...A piece well written, engaging – good work… mine is here: http://www.image-verse.com/clownrobkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-69437964203975459812011-09-07T11:10:52.266-06:002011-09-07T11:10:52.266-06:00So beautiful, the tiny things sprinkled throughout...So beautiful, the tiny things sprinkled throughout: the leftover dove, hands small as leaves, birds' eggs, a shivering dog....<br /><br />I thought of the Bruce Springsteen song 'Reason to Believe': "at the end of every hard-earned day people find some reason to believe".Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-49176056779091428672011-09-07T08:18:54.028-06:002011-09-07T08:18:54.028-06:00Of mythical proportions. I love the appearance of...Of mythical proportions. I love the appearance of the whale and the resolution!colleenhttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-61496453037770583152011-09-06T18:45:22.521-06:002011-09-06T18:45:22.521-06:00Beautiful poetry, Jenne. Your line, "Tears sh...Beautiful poetry, Jenne. Your line, "Tears shed over that which the heart does not wish to see.", is very familiar and resonates with me.Ann Grenierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13501522748426995035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-15149106762464243982011-09-06T16:23:16.742-06:002011-09-06T16:23:16.742-06:00A poem I responded to with my heart, Jenne. The de...A poem I responded to with my heart, Jenne. The depths plunged to swim and touch the genius of a whale, the rescue of the spirit by the sight of a man with a dog tells me that in you and your poetry is the spirit of hope the survivor, and that you and your poetry shall triumph as is meant to happen. Beautiful write my dear.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-45340356272295815172011-09-06T14:23:31.479-06:002011-09-06T14:23:31.479-06:00The voice amid wreckage. Truly a lovely poem, Jenn...The voice amid wreckage. Truly a lovely poem, Jenne.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com