tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post6763326794565731758..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: For Sunday photo challenge....One Stop PoetryJenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-41287039249858299602011-01-25T14:53:04.182-07:002011-01-25T14:53:04.182-07:00keep taking heart...you are good and you will get ...keep taking heart...you are good and you will get there...i dream of paris myself...and hope one day to go there...maybe even to live.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-80314268681088935272011-01-24T02:03:17.160-07:002011-01-24T02:03:17.160-07:00Many thanks to each of you for your so very hearte...Many thanks to each of you for your so very heartening comments! xxxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-39123049879366339142011-01-23T18:21:08.466-07:002011-01-23T18:21:08.466-07:00no need to get back in the saddle...you can ride b...no need to get back in the saddle...you can ride bare back.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-35340201120993094822011-01-23T16:50:05.314-07:002011-01-23T16:50:05.314-07:00I just finished reading "Monsieur Monde Vanis...I just finished reading "Monsieur Monde Vanishes" by Georges Simenon. Part of the story is set in Paris, part in Marseilles, part in a casino in Nice. Your poem - your take on the photo - fits that story. Well done, Jen.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-2642456721720082922011-01-23T15:49:43.605-07:002011-01-23T15:49:43.605-07:00I'm quite taken by your poem, in particular th...I'm quite taken by your poem, in particular the abundance of literary allusions. Inspires me to start writing down my dreams, rather bouts of insomnia, again. So thank you, Jenne' ...I believe Sartre swore repeatedly insisting hell was other people; minor swear by today's standards of course. Anyhow, the value of support and community is priceless. Angst and isolation can breakdown anyone, and it is wonderful to learn about how you've made great efforts to reach out to fellow writers, One Stop Poetry included. Many thanks. Now all I need is a ticket to Paris!dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-35204796569794812532011-01-23T14:43:10.249-07:002011-01-23T14:43:10.249-07:00Thanks, Ami. This challenge thing is way cool, ye...Thanks, Ami. This challenge thing is way cool, yes? love, JJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-2645290410985062752011-01-23T14:41:57.482-07:002011-01-23T14:41:57.482-07:00Wow, Jenne'! Maureen is right. The whole world...Wow, Jenne'! Maureen is right. The whole world's in this poem! I love all the art and historical references to Paris culture--some of which were lost on me, but I loved them nonetheless. Indeed, after this reading, I feel done by Paris!Ami Mattisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391930163467566669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-59174622257763886472011-01-23T10:48:59.149-07:002011-01-23T10:48:59.149-07:00Tout le monde in this poem! And then some.
Hilari...Tout le monde in this poem! And then some.<br /><br />Hilarious.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-2953878589344234292011-01-23T09:50:21.255-07:002011-01-23T09:50:21.255-07:00Ha! I've met this Ben Wa, too. *walks away chu...Ha! I've met this Ben Wa, too. *walks away chuckling*Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-18326378525491255462011-01-23T09:32:31.512-07:002011-01-23T09:32:31.512-07:00"...There is a riotous hoisting of all petard..."...There is a riotous hoisting of all petards..."<br /><br />Have to love it, and one can see you have been done by Paree and are only to eager to pass it along. Every stanza here is crammed so full of image and experience, sweetness and excitement, not to mention the references to every example of the arts, that it would take ten readings to unpack the half. And a very positive and novel take on the prompt, as well. Loved it.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-57058604691947440082011-01-23T07:49:03.655-07:002011-01-23T07:49:03.655-07:00Very different take on the photo prompt! Rather en...Very different take on the photo prompt! Rather enjoyed my trip. Bit the last line leaves me wondering. She was Paris and her spiritAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-61774908035133643582011-01-23T07:43:29.000-07:002011-01-23T07:43:29.000-07:00I think I neede to catch up on some reading. This...I think I neede to catch up on some reading. This clearly shows that you are very well read...and yet I love the inferences and play on<br />words...especially too loose LuatrecJerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04874006676004790578noreply@blogger.com