tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post5962250462866441926..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: Monday Poem for the Memes/ Magpie Tales/One ShotJenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-36088409027846754272011-06-09T16:18:20.934-06:002011-06-09T16:18:20.934-06:00Thank you, Tumblewords, HyperCryptical et al-- per...Thank you, Tumblewords, HyperCryptical et al-- perhaps, Tess I should have called this "Picasso Eye"-- synchronicity? ! xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-60374829344737384612011-06-09T10:56:50.441-06:002011-06-09T10:56:50.441-06:00Of course "Picasso Eye" reached out and ...Of course "Picasso Eye" reached out and grabbed me, since I just wrote a poem on it. Excellent write, Jen.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-62354177912104252592011-06-09T05:43:11.297-06:002011-06-09T05:43:11.297-06:00What a fine piece of writing - excellent.
Anna :o...What a fine piece of writing - excellent.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-10852637924478275132011-06-08T21:09:23.789-06:002011-06-08T21:09:23.789-06:00Intriguing piece!Intriguing piece!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-31021986749671837802011-06-08T09:19:51.337-06:002011-06-08T09:19:51.337-06:00As usual, you rock ... The skewed vision of the gl...As usual, you rock ... The skewed vision of the glass eye is given its spiritual inside here, which is to see beyond seeing, or beyond stereotypy -- a woundedness in one world but a gift in this other. Great job. - BrendanBrendanhttp://blueoran.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-52932133789138761972011-06-08T07:10:07.880-06:002011-06-08T07:10:07.880-06:00This is made to be read aloud - and I did. It flow...This is made to be read aloud - and I did. It flows beautifully and the references are so apt.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-32202015485059550182011-06-08T06:38:52.348-06:002011-06-08T06:38:52.348-06:00Pretending to see
Most are blocked by a tree
But c...Pretending to see<br />Most are blocked by a tree<br />But clarity comes at some point<br />No matter how much some one keeps their nose out of joint<br />Each part could have been a poem in and of itself<br />Great write here at your shelfPat Hatthttp://rhymetime24.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-55698733604684206222011-06-07T23:11:30.367-06:002011-06-07T23:11:30.367-06:00"My blue glass eye
winces
With impunity
When..."My blue glass eye<br />winces<br />With impunity<br />When the heart gives itself<br />To a hitchhiker from Juarez."<br /><br />That stanza alone could be its own poem. Great take on the Magpie prompt.*https://www.blogger.com/profile/06484208765656281917noreply@blogger.com