tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post5801902626575986626..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: Revision: Fugitive - Posted for DVerse OLN and Beyond...Jenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-5225535695965954092012-04-08T13:44:07.771-06:002012-04-08T13:44:07.771-06:00Yes at the end the truth of our oneness in nature ...Yes at the end the truth of our oneness in nature burns brightly, our bodies yearning to give it up, our minds, our desires clinging to stripped branches and we deny our curses, and try to find our cures. Your poem brought that and more into brilliant relief.<br />Thank you for your generous and kind comment on my poem Passion. My faith remains resilient in a deity, my faith in this world's institutions regarding that faith is irreparably damaged. The nuns condemned me to hell. Perhaps I'll end up there; but if love can save me, perhaps there is hope yet. Thanks Jenne.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-83619270801813326062012-04-06T05:20:24.802-06:002012-04-06T05:20:24.802-06:00Imagery powerful and galloping away.
Overfill the...Imagery powerful and galloping away.<br /><br />Overfill the senses and brain and I don't know where to land...but this 'ride' is a rich stew and a challenge to take in.<br /><br />Exciting work here, Jenne.<br /><br />Lady NyoLady Nyohttp://ladynyo.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-50898631185446263312012-04-05T20:08:47.566-06:002012-04-05T20:08:47.566-06:00Thank you, dear fellow poets and friends. I enjoy...Thank you, dear fellow poets and friends. I enjoy the Eucharist of our Tuesdays and all the other times. We are scattered all over the earth and yet come together with a common goal-- amazing. xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-48490925651768729142012-04-03T21:41:52.093-06:002012-04-03T21:41:52.093-06:00achingly good, filled with imagery that mingles so...achingly good, filled with imagery that mingles so beautifully.Zoe Francescahttp://zoe-moonlightandshadows.blogspot.com.au/2012/04/on-street.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-7861653090587899582012-04-03T21:39:49.323-06:002012-04-03T21:39:49.323-06:00This is a piece full of eloquence and illumination...This is a piece full of eloquence and illumination. Reading the first three verses, I had to do a double take - especially with the choice of images to illustrate the poem. As always, your images are brilliant, and your metaphors strong... but at times so demanding of the reader! Then I saw that I didn't have to take the pursuers (and the pursuit) as literal "things", that the pursuit itself was the central metaphor... and everything fell into place. Bravo!Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-50135334580852401772012-04-03T17:40:45.310-06:002012-04-03T17:40:45.310-06:00Lovely write with cool imagery !Lovely write with cool imagery !ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-76321870042687604492012-04-03T15:33:57.168-06:002012-04-03T15:33:57.168-06:00I feel like I am in the presence of one of today&#...I feel like I am in the presence of one of today's great writers whenever I visit your blog, Jenne and today is no exception. Far and way one of the finest pieces of poetry I've been fortunate enough to read.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-71881359225596593032012-04-03T14:27:53.159-06:002012-04-03T14:27:53.159-06:00Your vivid imagery never disappoints: you employ b...Your vivid imagery never disappoints: you employ beautifully that "thundering storm of crows", "multitudes of owls", "chattering of sparrows in the plum blossoms". And snow as "infuriated", that gull "irradiated", the fields afire with lavender also stick in the mind, as does the invocation to "[p]aint to burn down the wormwood / of day." As Brian says, "wicked cool"!Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-14497018935029546562012-04-03T13:11:27.356-06:002012-04-03T13:11:27.356-06:00dang...some wicked cool imagery and fascinating st...dang...some wicked cool imagery and fascinating story telling....the to ash, early on and slipping from the white dress of your flesh....whew...i like jenneBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com