tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post5545555149544805944..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: New Poem: Love Song of the Virtual Expatriate, for DVerse and Beyond.... Jenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-60412607265497482912012-11-14T14:32:38.867-07:002012-11-14T14:32:38.867-07:00Gorgeous write, Jen...Gorgeous write, Jen...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-17636215564859074802012-11-13T19:51:06.197-07:002012-11-13T19:51:06.197-07:00Jenne - you leave me speechless and in awe once ag...Jenne - you leave me speechless and in awe once again. Brava my dear, brava.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-43421713531141357682012-11-13T18:25:08.395-07:002012-11-13T18:25:08.395-07:00A beautiful poem, Jenne, throughout. I certainly ...A beautiful poem, Jenne, throughout. I certainly know the feeling of being more at home as an exile than in one's own "place/neighborhood." <br /><br />It's one reason I think people gravitate towards a place like New York City. <br /><br />So many great lines and images here - beautiful the fisherman and wife, and all the way to the exile at the end, writing. We are very much brought into each of these moments. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-56425084328391089552012-10-30T18:28:33.317-06:002012-10-30T18:28:33.317-06:00Jenne, this poem is so gorgeous and your use of It...Jenne, this poem is so gorgeous and your use of Italian sprinkled through-out it makes it all the more so.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-69474364119838283432012-10-30T14:00:45.451-06:002012-10-30T14:00:45.451-06:00I'm struck by your use of the word "virtu...I'm struck by your use of the word "virtual" in the poem's title, because that longing held in the heart is very real. <br /><br />What's expressed here is lyrically and beautifully conveyed in vivid visuals. I especially like your use of images of dough, the making of bread, which keep us attached to what is not romanticized. The acknowledgment of the realities of place and existence is moving. Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com