tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post4485549158982942224..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: New Poem: Refraction, for Magpie Tales and Beyond... Jenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-88202080373702345732013-03-26T10:09:53.546-06:002013-03-26T10:09:53.546-06:00A sad and smart poem. I liked it very much.
=)A sad and smart poem. I liked it very much.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-60531261420863512532013-03-25T13:46:23.336-06:002013-03-25T13:46:23.336-06:00Good to see you, Jenne. This is so good. I especia...Good to see you, Jenne. This is so good. I especially like the 2nd stanza.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-85696737428124751002013-03-24T18:00:28.031-06:002013-03-24T18:00:28.031-06:00I like how you return us to mirrors at the end, ho...I like how you return us to mirrors at the end, how they become the metaphor for our seeing ourselves in others' reflections of us. I especially like the stanza beginning "The back of someone leaving. . . ." Such a beautiful series of images. I've always thought deeply saddening the act of watching someone go, leaving being its own kind of refraction.<br /><br />Thank you for the generous words about the poem I wrote for my brother. I only realized recently that I can no longer hear the sound of his voice in my mind.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com