tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post2110486837717823522..comments2023-07-20T13:36:04.197-06:00Comments on La Parola Vivace: New Poem for Magpie Tales Monday and Beyond....Jenne' R. Andrews http://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-11469230949363120692011-08-19T05:14:30.383-06:002011-08-19T05:14:30.383-06:00This is very nicely put, love the way you have wea...This is very nicely put, love the way you have weaved words...<br />Nice imagination of would have been and what changes you have done...I liked it!:)Erratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-15974893910981060402011-08-17T14:53:06.702-06:002011-08-17T14:53:06.702-06:00I think this is about the best I've read so fa...I think this is about the best I've read so far this week. All's to say about it is in the comments already here. Thank you for an inspiring poem.Lucy Westenrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787225228788303013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-33275700443749759982011-08-17T03:23:29.571-06:002011-08-17T03:23:29.571-06:00I think this is magnificent. I love the way you ta...I think this is magnificent. I love the way you take me right into the poem and the experiences recounted, as if I'd been standing beside you.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-64095575580787789252011-08-16T23:28:51.086-06:002011-08-16T23:28:51.086-06:00I'm all for restful dreams...I'm all for restful dreams...Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-30052492892078318962011-08-16T17:47:11.384-06:002011-08-16T17:47:11.384-06:00Love this - excellent word picturing.Love this - excellent word picturing.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-48742676039523192912011-08-16T13:06:58.204-06:002011-08-16T13:06:58.204-06:00Gorgeous poem Jen. Such a pleasure to be right the...Gorgeous poem Jen. Such a pleasure to be right there watching, drinking in the whiteness and the rich color, the poverty and pain of the previous tenants and your vision for renewal of the old place. I always look forward to your work with high anticipation.Ann Grenierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13501522748426995035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-26279738562968186832011-08-15T21:58:14.876-06:002011-08-15T21:58:14.876-06:00Beautiful imagery, colored with heart and filled w...Beautiful imagery, colored with heart and filled with soul. Love this.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-65359681608285541632011-08-15T20:15:04.063-06:002011-08-15T20:15:04.063-06:00Thank you each for your wonderful comments-- xxxjThank you each for your wonderful comments-- xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-81458352922008952012011-08-15T20:04:35.636-06:002011-08-15T20:04:35.636-06:00some nice textures to this jenne...the memories le...some nice textures to this jenne...the memories left behind and in the end coming home yourself...nice.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-51172431593572521852011-08-15T19:49:56.565-06:002011-08-15T19:49:56.565-06:00"And I worked in the heat
In my compulsion to..."And I worked in the heat<br />In my compulsion to purify…<br />To make new, this work<br />Of a woman’s hands<br />Even a woman alone<br />Weaving a nest for herself"<br /><br />Beautiful. I think every woman has felt this way at one time or another.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-88481746821167834392011-08-15T19:27:50.633-06:002011-08-15T19:27:50.633-06:00Wonderful take on that photo prompt.
Some outstan...Wonderful take on that photo prompt.<br /><br />Some outstanding images throughout; my favorite may be "A lily like a jester's hat". The narrative is punctuated with rich visuals that make the reader stop and collect herself - "tears of rain // Had left a hieroglyphic of lack / on the old walls" is one; " this work / Of a woman's hands/ Even a woman along/ Weaving a nest for herself" is another. Both the choice and combination of details produce an affecting poem.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-74084642917083567542011-08-15T19:08:45.834-06:002011-08-15T19:08:45.834-06:00the migration of workers and all they leave behind...the migration of workers and all they leave behind, I live around many in the central valley of CA...they come and they go..making home where they can, then gone as the season is gone ..and those that remain take rest...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-74914899966676188322011-08-15T18:34:38.372-06:002011-08-15T18:34:38.372-06:00how we carry about ourselves, our greater selves, ...how we carry about ourselves, our greater selves, and impress them upon the world. here - i am, my skirt and i, and our paint palette. how you will become me as i beat within these walls.<br /><br />xo<br />erinerinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16636371927224076866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-23425348887197826312011-08-15T17:38:31.185-06:002011-08-15T17:38:31.185-06:00Bella! Bella! I love this, I can hear it, see it a...Bella! Bella! I love this, I can hear it, see it and smell it...even loving the poppy paintings! Just wonderful Jenne!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-487059350883726456.post-32329261888932205772011-08-15T17:20:01.338-06:002011-08-15T17:20:01.338-06:00I like the subtlety of the connections that you ma...I like the subtlety of the connections that you made with the colors.zekehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08948881749715167279noreply@blogger.com